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Meta-Writing

Reply to Tammy -- Wow, I love the song! It does a great job of discussing metacognition. I also liked your table to connect metacognition with writing. It is well thought-out and easy to understand. When students can work on a "paper" as several "mini" parts, it makes the process a whole lot easier. They do not feel so overwhelmed to face the writing task.

Reply to Deborah -- I like your comment ... "No student can remain passive when asked to put their ideas to paper." One of the statements that I use to "convince" my students that writing is a great thing (they tend think it is stupid, boring, and a waste of time) is that writing is very active. Just a few well-written sentences can change a person's mind about a specific issue. Teenagers often feel that the world is unfair, and that they are getting the short-end of the stick. By focusing the energy that is usually wasted on complaining on writing, they can do something about it. Writing allows students to express there beliefs and ideas (hopefully in a calm manner). This action is less likely to get the students in trouble than the usual arguing, yelling, non-compliance, and violence. If students really feel something is unfair, they should research the topic and write a persuasive report to convince their teachers/administrators/parents that they are right. If nothing else, at least the adults will be impressed enough with the report that they might be willing to listen to the student's positions and attempt a compromise.

Reply to Mary -- During my first year of teaching, my district also required periodic writing essays to be turned in to the administration. All teachers (in all disciplines) were required to do a writing essay each week. Then we had to turn in four of those essays each quarter. This was required after low ISAT writing scores. Soon, students and teachers, both, were worn out from so much writing. The constant long essays took time away from other necessary activities. This was especially evident in the lower grades, where most of the writing tasks took an entire week to complete. The students were constantly writing. This project seemed to be yet another example of a great idea in theory, that was not so practical to implement. Needless to say, the project did not last past that first year. Your idea of monthly writing tasks seems a whole lot more feasible. I have tried to adapt my districts original concept into my curriculum in the form of weekly journal entries. The difference is that even though students are given weekly opportunities to express their ideas in writing, they are not required to create "perfect" (double and triple checked and corrected for fluency, clarity, and mechanics) essays every week. We still do the "perfect" essays every month or so, but the students are under less writing pressure.

 

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by Casey Jo Burrus